13-Dec-2000
I am experimenting with writing something that is not lemon to try and improve myself and my abilities. I've heard way too many comments about my being "nothing more than another lemon writer." OK, so I let it bug me. I happen to think I write lemon quite well. Now I just have to write plot of the same caliber. Wish me luck with these experiments and yes this does mean the Muses are awake. For how long? Who knows!
Warning: lemon stuff ahead.
I'm afraid
It's my first time
But you're so confident
Knowing I need that
My trembling eases
Soft silk and steel encircle my wrists
The click of the cuffs sealing
Trapping me
Starts the trembling again
You whisper soft words
Sounds
Soothing me
Running a gentle hand along my back
Do I need to stop?
Oh no
But I've been hurt before
Trust betrayed
Some memories die hard
I know you love me
I know you need this
So I want it too
We begin again
The bond we share growing
As trust is earned
Love proven true
Desire turning molten
Pain and pleasure blending
Undistinguishable
Taking us over the edge together
Forever
End
So how'd I do? Maybe the Muses aren't awake and I'm just hallucinating?
All this typing is making my hands sore!
Phoenix
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