16-Aug-2000
> And yes, it can be done in a non-hentai way - I think
::grins:: But what would be the fun of *that*?
Here's my go at this thing. Never done one of these before...
Duo, white-knuckled, pounded [his fists against the wall], glad that no one could see him. The [construction workers outside] had been building for several days and he needed [sleep]. He'd die of embarrassment if the others caught him [snoozing during a mission].
"Duo!" Heero [grumbled] as he walked towards their shared [dorm room].
Duo threw his hands in the air, [saying "I can't stay here. Shower."] and grabbed a towel.
Heero, [hearing this last, considered] banging [the door shut in frustration] but decided against it. This time, he would [skip his grumbled noise condemnation] and see if he [could bang] Duo [instead].
Duo heard the door [shut behind his partner] and quickly [yanked down] his underwear, [stuffing it in a locker] before [Heero saw his smily- face boxers].
Heero entered the room and [was simultaneously aroused and suspicious] as he saw Duo. "What in the hell is going on?"
Duo [flushed and started guiltily] and realized he had better tell him the [truth--well, part of it]. "[Well, Hee-chan, it's just that I was going to take a shower to distract me from the banging noises of the construction workers outside, and I had been banging my fist against the wall to distract me but that just got me thinking about *other* kinds of banging and then I *really* needed a cold shower, so I was going to take one and then you walked in as I was putting away my boxers and--mmph.]"
//Well,// Duo thought as he returned the kiss, //who'd've thought Heero Yuy's mind ran along the same tracks as mine? Goddamned construction... mmm, that feels *really* nice... at least he doesn't suspect about the boxers... //
~owari~
Yeah, so I added the little thought at the end. But the rest was within five words like it was supposed to be!
And once again, having written, Cutter is off to bed. ::cheers::
(:./cutter/banging)
