NOTE: This commentary is a companion piece to The Drums of Heaven and may not make complete sense unless you've read chapter 2 of that story.
Zefyr: Commentary for the second chapter! Now that you've read ---
Duo: I am on STRIKE.
Trowa: Yeah.
Zefyr: What?
Duo: Since when did you decide to do Bastard Duo? Isn't that a cliché?
Trowa: And bastard Trowa, too.
Zefyr: Not really. Well, it's a stereotype, but not really used enough to be a cliché yet.
Wufei: I think it's high time someone else got to be the bastard, other than Heero or me.
Heero: Yeah.
Zefyr: Hey, the story's only two chapters in. Don't go breaking up the party yet.
Relena: I thought it was good. Except for the unhappy parts.
Quatre: Zef did a nice job of moving from scene to scene.
Duo: By the way, am I dead?
Zefyr: What?
Duo: You said in the summary I'm gone. GONE? What? You killed me already?
Zefyr: I haven't killed anyone.
Trowa: Yes, you have. I read your other stories. You're brutal. You kill off characters without thinking twice. You slaughtered a whole regiment of British spirit folk and beat the crap out of your lead dragon.
Zefyr: I am not brutal.
Wufei: I agree with Trowa. I want to add a line to my contract that I live through this story.
Zefyr: Behave, or I'll edit this chapter so your head is shaved.
Wufei: I'll be good.
Quatre: I want to know why Trowa left like that.
Trowa: It's just a story.
Quatre: Still, it's a little upsetting.
Rat: I liked it.
Duo: Who are you?
Rat: I'm in the next chapter.
Duo: What are you doing here?
Rat: What are YOU doing here? You don't even show up for another chapter or two!
Duo: How do you know?
Rat: I read the author's notes.
Duo: Lemme see that. Hmm. Interesting. *flip* *flip* Verrry interesting... oh, look at that.
Wufei: Let me see.
Duo: No. Mine! Get yer own.
Heero: This is ridiculous. Can't you just wait to see what happens next?
Quatre: Where'd Trowa go?
Heero: He's reading again.
Wufei: We already read the recent chapter.
Heero: No, I think he's catching up on Mitsugi's epic. She updated just a day ago.
Wufei: I didn't get an email alert. Damn it.
Duo: I want to read it when Trowa's done.
Zefyr: Hello! People! My story, you're supposed to comment on THIS story. Remember? I can cut this short if you don't behave!
Relena: I say we be nice to the author. I like Wufei's hair long. It's sexy.
Wufei: Really?
Relena: *smirk*
Duo: Relena's smirking. Be afraid.
Heero: Shut up.
End Part 3
(:./sol/behind3)
